My first destination after graduating from Sanata Dharma University is apply for a job to be a secretary in office where my father works. That office is located in Jakarta. That is my first destination because of slightly higher salary, hawhawhaw. Besides, I want to buy a new car with my own money, so I try to apply job there. Maybe, because I am in Jakarta, I also have a chance to be an actress or a model, hawhawhaw. Becoming an English teacher is my last choice, hehe, but I also like if I become a teacher, because it can make people clever and useful in the future.
I give my first choice to be a secretary because I want to continue my father's work in that office, although I am not be the same as my father. I also want to make my parents proud of me and give them some of my salary.
So, I have to study hard to reach my dreams, and I hope I can graduate from Sanata Dharma on time with a good GPA. So, it can make me easier to apply job in my father's office...^^
I give my first choice to be a secretary because I want to continue my father's work in that office, although I am not be the same as my father. I also want to make my parents proud of me and give them some of my salary.
So, I have to study hard to reach my dreams, and I hope I can graduate from Sanata Dharma on time with a good GPA. So, it can make me easier to apply job in my father's office...^^
a nice posting...
BalasHapusplease be careful with an article.
"for a job to be a secretary in office "
it should be in an office
good, but please pay attention on grammar :D
BalasHapusall: ok tq...cip..^^
BalasHapusThat’s already good..^_^ But, too many hawhawhaw…:D
BalasHapusHere I’ll try to correct yours. The words signed by * indicate incorrect grammar and phrase. The words signed by # indicate my correction. However, if it still makes you confused, I will be glad if we can meet and discuss together..^_^
Actually, I have many dreams and future plans in my mind. *(Such as becoming a secretary, an actress, a model, and an English teacher). I know, maybe not all of my dreams become true, but I hope one of my dreams or almost all of my dreams become true.
My first destination after graduating from Sanata Dharma University is *apply #(applying) for a job to be a secretary in office where my father works. That office is located in Jakarta. That is my first destination because of slightly higher salary, hawhawhaw. Besides, I want to buy a new car with my own money, so I try to apply job there. Maybe, because I am in Jakarta, I also have a chance to be an actress or a model, hawhawhaw. Becoming an English teacher is my last choice, hehe, but I also like if I become a teacher, because it can make people clever and useful in the future.
I give my first choice to be a secretary because I want to continue my father's work in that office, although I am not *(be) the same as my father. I also want to make my parents proud of me and give them some of my salary.
So, I have to study hard to reach my dreams, and I hope I can graduate from Sanata Dharma on time with a good GPA. So, it can make me easier to apply job in my father's office...^^
@ms.susi: hehe..ok thx for ur comment...I probably will reduce the use of"hawhaw"...^^
BalasHapusI think, I understand about ur correction..^^