Hi friends.....in this post I want to share with you about my experiences on the past Sunday...
On sunny Sunday, I had decided to hang out together wit my friends. We had decided to gather at 9.30 a.m. in my house, but almost all of my friends came about 10 a.m., so we went to the destinations at 10.30 a.m.. We had a plan to go to some places along this sunny Sunday. That day was shine and cool, so made us more spirited to hang out together. We all were 6 people. We decided to go to Gembiraloka Zoo and Parangtritis beach.
The first place was Gembiraloka Zoo. We decided to go there because we all seldom visited Gembiraloka Zoo for a long time, it was about 3-6 years. So, we all agreed to visit Gembiraloka Zoo. we arrived there about 11 a.m.. we just took a walk and saw the animals there. We were a little bit surprised because many animals had gone, and Gembiraloka had a different arrangement. Sometimes, we gave the animals some foods and took a picture of them. We also took a picture each other or together. We were really happy. Some of us tried to drove an elephant, and took their pictures.
About 1 p.m., we out from Gembiraloka Zoo and looked for some restaurant that had cheap price.^^... Finally, we decided to eat in "SS" or "Special Sambal". After eating, we all looked for a mosque to pray. After praying, we continued our trip to go to Parangtritis beach.
We arrived at Parangtritis beach about 2.50 p.m.. Before we played the waves and the sand, we waited Adzan and prayed Ashar first. After that, we immediately changed our clothes and played the water. Some of us just played the sand and some of us took a bath in the beach. We finished played in the beach about 5.30 p.m.. After that, we cleaned up our clothes and our body. We cleaned up our body about one hour. Then, we looked for a mosque to pray Maghrib. Along the way to go home, we also tried to find a restaurant to get dinner.
We were so happy that day. We wanted to get more trip anymore. We arrived at home about 8 p.m.. We were so tired the day, but we all were happy...^^
On sunny Sunday, I had decided to hang out together wit my friends. We had decided to gather at 9.30 a.m. in my house, but almost all of my friends came about 10 a.m., so we went to the destinations at 10.30 a.m.. We had a plan to go to some places along this sunny Sunday. That day was shine and cool, so made us more spirited to hang out together. We all were 6 people. We decided to go to Gembiraloka Zoo and Parangtritis beach.
The first place was Gembiraloka Zoo. We decided to go there because we all seldom visited Gembiraloka Zoo for a long time, it was about 3-6 years. So, we all agreed to visit Gembiraloka Zoo. we arrived there about 11 a.m.. we just took a walk and saw the animals there. We were a little bit surprised because many animals had gone, and Gembiraloka had a different arrangement. Sometimes, we gave the animals some foods and took a picture of them. We also took a picture each other or together. We were really happy. Some of us tried to drove an elephant, and took their pictures.
About 1 p.m., we out from Gembiraloka Zoo and looked for some restaurant that had cheap price.^^... Finally, we decided to eat in "SS" or "Special Sambal". After eating, we all looked for a mosque to pray. After praying, we continued our trip to go to Parangtritis beach.
We arrived at Parangtritis beach about 2.50 p.m.. Before we played the waves and the sand, we waited Adzan and prayed Ashar first. After that, we immediately changed our clothes and played the water. Some of us just played the sand and some of us took a bath in the beach. We finished played in the beach about 5.30 p.m.. After that, we cleaned up our clothes and our body. We cleaned up our body about one hour. Then, we looked for a mosque to pray Maghrib. Along the way to go home, we also tried to find a restaurant to get dinner.
We were so happy that day. We wanted to get more trip anymore. We arrived at home about 8 p.m.. We were so tired the day, but we all were happy...^^
nice post, but more detail in spelling....,capital font.....heheheheh...
BalasHapusbut I'm not so sure,,,hehehe
um,,,,,,,,,your stories make me want to go to the zoo.hehe,,,please be careful with the spelling }"wit or with"? hehe
BalasHapusand also your grammar: to drove or to drive?hehehe
weppy: haha..ok wep, tq
BalasHapusdeny:haha...cip..tq den..yeah you're right..hehe...yaeh.. to drive..hehe
Hai, Ika.. it was a nice trip to be told...
BalasHapusWell, I hope you will have another nice trip which is challenged especially for your adrenalin.
I'm riSMA, your teacher of past narrative..
Okay, lets see your writing ..
You have a good way to divide your activity which is by place. What I mean by place is you have two major paragraphs containing Gembiraloka and Parang Tritis.
This is good actually because it makes you become focus in what you are going to tell.
I also have some notes for your writing and I think your friends have posted to you so I just want to add some..
1. so made us more spirited to hang out together.
For your understanding, that " so" is conjunction not as a subject. Therefore, it would better if you add the word " it" as the subject after " so".
2. we out from Gembiraloka Zoo.
I think you also have to add " were " after the word "we" or " went" as a verb.
I think that's all from me..
If you still have many questions just leave that in my blog.
Okay, Ika.. you had a good job to do..
And see you
@ms.risma: ok..tq miss..^^
BalasHapus